Review of: "Factors Associated with Outcomes of Status Disclosure among Antiretroviral Therapy (ART) Attendees in Public Health Facilities of Mekelle City, Tigray, Ethiopia"
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Major Comments Title C1, the tittle should be SMART pls add type of study design and time frame Background C2, It is better to start the background section by the definition of the outcome variable C3, Generally the back ground too shallow pls incorporate what previous literature explain about Outcomes of Status Disclosure among Antiretroviral Therapy (ART) and please update old reference. Method and MaterialsC4, the authors exclude patients who had "Clients with active mental problems that led to incoherence of speech and memory were excluded" from participation why? b/c such type of manifestation maybe the outcome of status disclosure C5, the authors calculated sample size by used proportion of the previous study but in the current study prevalence is not the objective pls modify again C6, the author should be calculated sample size by taking some sort of variable and then compare all of them, thereafter, that the highest sample size was the final author sample size C7,The authors stated that "An institutional-based cross-sectional study was employed."But in this title Case-control study design was appropriate rather than cross-sectional C8, who is your data collector please specify how many data collector with their profession C9, General comment regarding to the method section The authors missed a lot of section in the method parts so the authors should incorporate the following issue
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