Review of: "A QGIS Grid-Based Study to Understand the Relationship Between Land Surface Temperature and Greenness in Urban Areas"
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Sentence Clarity and Flow:"It is observed from the figure (Fig 1) that the greenest areas (Class 4 & 5) in the city during the month of March are sporadic."Consider simplifying for clarity: "Figure 1 shows that the greenest areas (Class 4 & 5) in the city during March are sporadic.""There is a big dark patch at the centre, some smaller patches towards the south and southwest..." "Big" is a casual term.You may replace it with "large" for a more formal tone.Also, "towards" could be replaced with "in" for precision: "There is a large dark patch in the center, with smaller patches in the south and southwest.""Most of the central areas of the city and eastern areas are almost sparse with no or less green vegetation (yellow areas).""Almost sparse" is vague.Instead, you could say: "Most of the central and eastern areas have little to no green vegetation, indicated by yellow areas.""There is another outer zone with NDVI between 0.25 and 0.5.""Another" could be redundant.It may be clearer to say: "An outer zone with NDVI values between 0.25 and 0.5 surrounds these areas."Punctuation: "Class 4 (2 (0.5 < NDVI <= 0.75)" has an extra parenthesis.It should be corrected to: "Class 4 (0.5 < NDVI <= 0.75).""Qeios, CC-BY 4.0 • Article, August 21, 2024" appears multiple times but isn't necessary in the flow of the text.You could omit these unless they're part of citation details.
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