Review of: "Raising Adaptive Capacity to Climate Change in Energy and Food Sectors of Egypt"
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should use the present tense with only one paragraph.3. In the introduction, the authors should provide a strong motivation for the paper and the obtained results.In addition, they should discuss the main contributions of their work in detail after the motivation part.The contribution of the manuscript should be in the present tense.4. The overall structure of the paper should be reconsidered for major modifications.5. The Methodology section is too poor and should contain more details about the work done.6.The explanations of the data and models used should be expanded and clarified.7. Discussion of uncertainty around projections and model assumptions is limited.8. The Conclusion is too poor and needs more clarification.9. Further punctuation marks should be checked throughout the paper, especially after the equations and at the end of the statements.10.The list of references is out of date.Please update the list of references with the state of the art in the introduction.11.The English could be improved in terms of grammar and clarity in places.
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