Review of: "Effects of Cinnamon on Cancer Prevention and Progression"
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Under Abstract; line 2 should read 'potential treatment' and not 'potentially treatment' Under Introduction; Line 3 -Diabetes Mellitus and not D. Mellites Line 4 -A mechanism of action which almost certainly overlaps with other diseases [ this is not a complete statement].Also, the author should choose to use either almost or certainly and not the two Under Introduction, paragraph 2 Line 2 As healthcare costs continue to rise, not expand Line 8 & 9: should rather read, 'This review will first discuss the biologically active cinnamon compound, followed by discussion on a selection of recent cinnamon and cancer studies according to the potential mechanism of action, including the targeting of transcription factors and kinases.'Under 2.0 (Biologically Active Cinnamon Compounds) Paragraph 1, line 3: Cinnamic acid - -----------------------------------'are' also important components and not 'have are' Paragraph 1, line 5 -----------------------------potential biological activity (' not suspected' ) Paragraph 2, line 3 - --------------------------screened based "on" and not "of" Paragraph 2, line 4: Write 127 in words and put 147 in brackets Paragraph 2, line 9: Should read, these are involved in lipid metabolism.Paragraph 3, line 1: there should be a comma after et al, and not a full stop Paragraph 3, line: Provide a strong, not an strong Paragraph 3, line 6: PCB2 has been shown-----------and not PCB2 has shown------Paragraph 4, line 4: There are many different studies that "presented" and not "represent" Qeios, CC-BY 4.0
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