Review of: "Factors influencing women’s decision choosing a public or private health facility for tuberculosis (TB) services: An analysis of Nepal demographic and health survey data 2016"
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Comments to Qeios Generally This manuscript needs an extensive language editing.The data would be updated to the most recent TB demographic survey.There should be a continuous line numbering throughout the manuscript.Tables should be re-arranged to be on a single page each.Kindly minimize the texts prior to each table as far as tables are self-explanatory.How could TB treatment and diagnosis be integrated to the services of private clinics? AbstractIn the methods sub-section; the phrase "NDHS 2016" has to be re-written as "2016 NDHS".Even here and there throughout the manuscript.In the results sub-section; the phrase "women living in the mountain region" needs to be rephrased as "women living in mountains".Even here and there throughout the manuscript.In the results sub-section; please replace "Women belonging to the richest category" with "women having higher income".Even here and there throughout the manuscript.In the result sub-section; please avoid the word "of" from the phrase "being of muslim".Even here and there throughout the manuscript.
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