Review of: "Assessing Sex Education Awareness Among Higher Secondary School Students in India"
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Looking at the abstract section, it can be observed that the organization is poor.For example, the first line or paragraph of the abstract section is first about the aim or purpose of the study, which should not be so.There should first be a short introduction or short literature on what the study is about, which should then be followed by the aim/purpose. For instance, this statement on the second line (Comprehensive sex education is crucial in promoting responsible sexual behavior, reducing the risk of sexually transmitted infections, and preventing unintended pregnancies)could be the introduction of the abstract and then followed by the aim.It is also observed that the methodology of the study is missing in the abstract.Results of the study are not reported in the abstract.The author should have presented the summary of the results of the study before going to what the findings of the study will do I would like to advise that the author go online and download good journal articles in order to learn how good abstracts are written Introduction: This work lacks literature.The introduction should contain what other people have written about this study both internationally and nationally.Apart from this, what the author has presented as the introduction is too short and should be improved.Aim/Objectives: If possible, the author should please create a section where the aim of the study is presented.Methodology: The methodology section is ambiguous and needs to be well explained and presented.For example, Sample selection:The author failed to explain how the schools and students were selected.There should be a breakdown of the way these were done.How many schools were selected?A breakdown of how the 50,000 students were selected.How many students were selected from each of the high schools.How many students from each grade Qeios, CC-BY 4.0 • Review,
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